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1. ishwar davé, uma davé and neelam kulkarni

2. the struggles that my grandparents went though immigrating to america from india.

3. 34

4. 1045

5. 15

6. 3

7. i never had any real hardship, at all. i always found a good job, make a lot, good money...i’ve been really lucky and blessed that so far it has been a good life to live

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9. i think it does because i had a strong quote and a catchy first few paragraphs

10. my aunt minal vyas

11. yes

12. no

13. davé family spends 50 years in america: the struggle that got them where they are now

14. i think my story is good. my family has really interesting stories about their immigration and i learned so much from them i did not know.

15. 92

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https://www.nytimes.com/live/2020/kobe-bryant-memorial-02-24 kobe bryant memorial: full coverage of the tributes at staples center this article this about the tribute of kobe and gianna's death at the staples center. highlights included the performances from beyonce and alicia keys, vanessa bryant spoke for the first time after kobe's death and three of the biggest basketball stars spoken about gianna and kobe. there were no sports jargons "and yes, sometimes, like immature kids, we argued. we fought, bantered or insulted each other with off-handed remarks. our feud. but make no mistake, folks thought we were on bad terms, when the cameras were turned off, he and i would throw a wink at each other.” this article was a feature story because it focused on the lives of kobe and gianna bryant. the article handles names of players by mentioning them and their relationship to kobe then writing about what they miss/loved about him.

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1. volleyball 2. 3a. standford 3b. wisconsin 3c. baylor 3d. minnesota 3e. nebraska 4. 23 wins to 4 losses, made it to the ncaa regionals, standford won ncaa volleyball title 5. 6 players on the floor at one time players cannot hit the ball twice in succession ball may be played off the net during a volley and on a serve 6. wipe: when a hitter pushes the ball off the opposing block so it lands out of bounds. double hit: 2 or more hits or contacts on the ball by the same player ace: a serve that is not passable and results immediately in a point. 7. only girls play volleyball. volleyball is more common for girls to play, but is played by both boys and girls 8. karch kiraly. born in santa barbara california and went to santa barbara high school. a part of ucla bruins and the us national team. won a gold medal at the 1996 olympics.

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