self-editing advice

1. ishwar davé, uma davé and neelam kulkarni

2. the struggles that my grandparents went though immigrating to america from india.

3. 34

4. 1045

5. 15

6. 3

7. i never had any real hardship, at all. i always found a good job, make a lot, good money...i’ve been really lucky and blessed that so far it has been a good life to live

8. end

9. i think it does because i had a strong quote and a catchy first few paragraphs

10. my aunt minal vyas

11. yes

12. no

13. davé family spends 50 years in america: the struggle that got them where they are now

14. i think my story is good. my family has really interesting stories about their immigration and i learned so much from them i did not know.

15. 92

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