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1. ishwar davé, uma davé and neelam kulkarni
2. the struggles that my grandparents went though immigrating to america from india. 
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4. 1045
5. 15
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7. i never had any real hardship, at all. i always found a good job, make a lot, good money...i’ve been really lucky and blessed that so far it has been a good life to live
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9. i think it does because i had a strong quote and a catchy first few paragraphs 
10. my aunt minal vyas
11.  yes 
12. no
13.  davé family spends 50 years in america: the struggle that got them where they are now
14. i think my story is good. my family has really interesting stories about their immigration and i learned so much from them i did not know.
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