feature writing preview

1. a hard news lead tells more facts about the story while this one try's more to hook the reader into reading it
2. who- 2 what-2 when-3 where-2 why-3 how- 3
3. yes
4. no, there are a couple paragraphs in between each quote
5. kevin mcloughlin, doral chenoweth III, ken andrews, tony florentino, shane cormier, ted williams
6. "my boss said to me: 'if you don't get him hired, you're fired,'"
7. 33
8. 756
9. they are each only a couple of words
10. to keep the reader interested in the story
11. yes
12. yes
13. i felt satisfied because now i had heard this one-in-a-million voice
14. a bit
15. not really
16. he only really described the impact the voice had on others, but i didn't feel like he described the actual voice

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sports current events

https://www.nytimes.com/live/2020/kobe-bryant-memorial-02-24 kobe bryant memorial: full coverage of the tributes at staples center this article this about the tribute of kobe and gianna's death at the staples center. highlights included the performances from beyonce and alicia keys, vanessa bryant spoke for the first time after kobe's death and three of the biggest basketball stars spoken about gianna and kobe. there were no sports jargons "and yes, sometimes, like immature kids, we argued. we fought, bantered or insulted each other with off-handed remarks. our feud. but make no mistake, folks thought we were on bad terms, when the cameras were turned off, he and i would throw a wink at each other.” this article was a feature story because it focused on the lives of kobe and gianna bryant. the article handles names of players by mentioning them and their relationship to kobe then writing about what they miss/loved about him.

sports exploration activity

1. volleyball 2. 3a. standford 3b. wisconsin 3c. baylor 3d. minnesota 3e. nebraska 4. 23 wins to 4 losses, made it to the ncaa regionals, standford won ncaa volleyball title 5. 6 players on the floor at one time players cannot hit the ball twice in succession ball may be played off the net during a volley and on a serve 6. wipe: when a hitter pushes the ball off the opposing block so it lands out of bounds. double hit: 2 or more hits or contacts on the ball by the same player ace: a serve that is not passable and results immediately in a point. 7. only girls play volleyball. volleyball is more common for girls to play, but is played by both boys and girls 8. karch kiraly. born in santa barbara california and went to santa barbara high school. a part of ucla bruins and the us national team. won a gold medal at the 1996 olympics.

portrait and self portrait

1. move your subject out of their comfort zones 2. a mirror or some other reflective surface offers an even easier way to take a self-portrait 3. take a series of shots i like this picture because i think the reflection in the window is very cool i like how the bright background reflects the guys mood i like this picture because its a clever way to take a mirror selfie i like this picture because it is another clever mirror selfie i like this picture because i like the lights behind her and in her glasses i like this picture because it is unconventional and i like how the girls pants stand out for my portrait, i was planning on doing either a dance photo or a headshot of a friend from dance. i want to do it at a park, but we will see if i have time to go to a park. to make my shot successful, i will do multiple different shots to see what works best and i will experiment will lighting. for my self portrait, i am leaning towards a dance photo, b

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